Ok biggest flaw I see with your build at the moment is you are building a monument asap. Not only do you lose villiger seconds, but you're also stopping yourself from getting HD (hunting dogs) earlier. On maps with lots of hunting (eg. marsh or tundra) you *always* get HD first. The build order I use has the monument to the villigers erected close to the time you build your first house (eg. if your doing a FH), or just prior to, or during your advance to classical (eg. you want a 5 min or sub 5 min advance). Your temple is also far too early, get HD first, and then begin your temple approx 1 minute before you want to advance.
This is a general build order for Isis FH that I use that you can try and mess around with (eg. due to animal conversion you'll need to have your houses quite early):
2 vills food + 2 vills food (get HD if high hunt map)
2 vills gold
2/3 vills food
2 vills gold
2 vills wood
Generally most of the res of your vills should go to food and before advance ensure you have about 6/7 total vills on gold. Be in classical around 5.30 to 6 mins
This is a build I'd use as Set if I wanted a early advance and to make rax units eg. vs Norse or Atlantean.
2 vills to food + make 7 to food (having this many asap lets you quite comfortably advance as early as you wish)... while you are sending 7 more to food send one or two vills to gold. Also you will need 1 vill to build 2 houses ASAP (maybe vill #4/5?) to support animal conversion.
Have about 4/5 on gold before advance and 2 on wood. Vills on wood should be towards the last vills that you make. During advance make a monument and than transition some vills from food to gold/wood if needed. You should be able to get a 4-5 minute advance depending on what you do after your first 9 vills on food.
These builds are a bit vague because I change what I do every game depending on the map, but I hope it gives you an idea of what you need to do. Play around with them to your liking xd For example, vs atty if you wanted to go early advance and you planned on making slingers, you may decide to put 4 vills on wood before advancing etc. etc.
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[This message has been edited by TTK_GeneralNoob (edited 07-21-2011 @ 09:25 PM).]