Ahh, time to pop the ballon...
Ok, first. It looks to me like your sceenies have alot of Grass A. Othere than that i think you did an ok job of designing! But try and mix terains.Second. Your presentation isnt very appleling. Its all mushed together and there's very little explanation.
Third. Work on your grammer and spelling. Dont be afraid to open up Word! Brave the lines and use the checker, and then copy and paste it here!
Fourth. Add in some dazzling effects like color and pictures and even bolding will help.
Your on your way, Grim! You just have to keep improving![/end watever this was]
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