I second Spitfire. I'd suggest changing the name, unless of course the color has a defining importance to his character.
Sounds like an interesting story...yet I am at loss by the minute details. I know little of Indigo lest that he is a man who apparently lost a person whom he loved. And somehow he plans to seek revenge on vasts amounts of people who have betrayed him.
How? What makes Indigo so cold, and if this is true, how could one ever fall in love with such an cold man? What land does this partake in? How can one plan to seek such massive revenge when is power is...well...uncertain? He is a god of sorts? A demi-god?
Such questions beg for answers.
[This message has been edited by Shadows (edited 10-04-2002 @ 00:24 AM).]