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Topic Subject:The Dark Battalion - Blumen Returns to Script Writing
BlumenKohl
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posted 03 October 2002 10:42 PM EDT (US)         
Everyone loves long campaigns when they are driven by an exciting storyline don't they? I know I do...

About a month or so ago, I wrote a script for an AoM campaign, and as with all my script work, I like to just let the thing sit there on my hard drive for the longest time possible, and then I'll come back to it an make revisions to it, it's always the best method to make good stories, make it, and let it sit, and then come back to it and edit it.

The story is called "The Dark Battalion" a story of a rebelious group...or should I say army of thousands of Greek, who wish to follow the ways of darkness and evil, who wish to defy the gods, and the acropolis, the governing center of the Greek states. And in order to carry out their task, they have forged the greatest of all armies. They succeed in devestating and virtually destroying everything of Athens, and now, they are coming, for Sparta, and you are the General of the army of Sparta.

The script for this is just over 50 pages, (at least 30 minutes of dialouge). I put in a few twists and turns here and there, and so I call this my pretzel story, though I didn't go over board with it.

I'd like to show you guys the opening cinematic of the campaign, and the first two pages of the script, since I like to keep my opening cinematics simple and armed with a nice hook, we'll call it the teaser.

So here's the teaser for "The Dark Battalion" by moi.

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Copy the URL into your browser by right-clicking.


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[This message has been edited by BlumenKohl (edited 10-04-2002 @ 06:19 PM).]

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BlumenKohl
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posted 03 October 2002 10:44 PM EDT (US)     1 / 4       
Oh crap, I thought I was in the Scn Design forum...oops TSD, move this piece o' crap over there NOW!

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lief ericson
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posted 04 October 2002 05:22 PM EDT (US)     2 / 4       
Er...the link doesn't work. I had to right-click on it and click properties then copy and paste! Thanks a lot !

Ooooh. Nice. Do you play as the bad guys?


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BlumenKohl
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posted 04 October 2002 06:22 PM EDT (US)     3 / 4       
The good guys of course. It'll work better because it'll put you in a position of weakness throught out the majority of the campaign.

I'm deciding on wether putting it up for some scenario design team to use the script and make it into their own campaign.

Or use it for my own self, and make it into my own campaign along with my friends...


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Toilken
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posted 10 October 2002 01:57 PM EDT (US)     4 / 4       
ok im stealing it, only kidding its great, it has inspired me to write my own script, it better be epic with epic music(try getting orbital theme homeworld and warcraft 3 music), i think i will center myself more to eggie design though, but high on my priority list when i get the game at christmas will be to download your campaign
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