Reason this is a 2 is because of the Trojan Walls across the map, seperating you from the other players. Which allows you to bide your time and build an army up rather easily. Plus, because of the walls, the Egyptions can Roc Spam you by way easily.
The balance is okay, no one has allies. Just a Free-For-All. But like I said above, the walls let you build up an army. Which killed your score.
Not very creative. This is an easy scenario to make. You just seperated four different players with a Kronos in the middle.
Map Design: 2
Nothing really. Grass A, Sand, Snow and Hades terrain with their respective civs(except Norse and Egyption, they're swapped). Then mixed Oak Forest, Gold Mine Large, and Giraffes. No eyecandy either.
None whatsoever. You just started out like it was a random map, yet this was supposed to be a multiplayer scenario. Maybe you posted it in the wrong section? Anyways, no instructions. Not even "Slaughter your enemies! >:D" nothin, nada, and zilch.
Try working on the eyecandy and instruction departments. Even make a small story to go with it, or add triggers to make it an RMS.