I can't say it is a very good work for an expirenced designer but if you are a novice designer then I'll say it is a good work.
Please before making a campaign -
* First, Try to make quality scenarios.
* Do a hard work on cinematics.
* Do a hard work on triggers.(the timing of your triggers wasn't good.After some time of gameplay your cinematics start which is not good)
* Finally, set up a deep story.(If required, write a story on paper first)
*** If you keep working hard, you have a bright future.
Posted on 01/03/17 @ 07:48 AM
as we knew,author was always hard to edit a good scn for the player.