Please don't hurry to create and submit a campaign. Playtest your every scenario and you will realize why I am saying this.I shall say same to you as I said to onegene.
Please before making a campaign -
* First, Try to make quality scenarios.
* Do a hard work on cinematics.
* Do a hard work on triggers.(the timing of your triggers wasn't good.)
* Finally, set up a deep story.(If required, write a story on paper first)
*** If you keep working hard, you have a bright future.