The cinematic ran smoothly for me without a problem. There were some parts where the camera angles were hard to follow/stuck behind walls but that's partially because I am using EE to view the cinematic and EE moves the camera back a bit.
For the most part, execution was very well done. Some minor complaints I have are that there was no music during the battle scenes as well as a repeated "under attack by gaia!" noise caused when the gaia army attacked the p1 army.
While I have yet to see any gameplay, the storyline thus far has been somewhat generic: something we've seen plenty of before. It has lots of potential, though, and I look forward to seeing more of this work. :)
Map Design: 5
I really loved the city designs. Some camera angles really showed off your handiwork very well and it overall gave a very nice and thorough design.
Story/Instructions: 4.5 (rounded to 5)
Pretty professional dialogue that's easy to follow. The characters are introduced in a very nice pace, and it definitely leaves me hyped for more.
I look forward to seeing the finished product! This has lots of potential. Too bad college is sucking up so much of my time >.<