no playability. but good action that made the cinematic entertaining during the entire time. but sometimes, the cinematic lagged for the amount of units you put into the scenario which sometimes was kind of annoying.
I cant really make a comment for balance since it was a cinematic only and you will always win.
Great Cinematic and camera tracks. you used some different render sky, music, sounds and lots of action. the dialogs sometimes needed some work. really not bad for being your first scneairo. I thought it was going to be a crappy scenario since you said it was your first, but i guess i was wrong. doesnt look like its your first.
Although the battle was mostly for resources and not for pride, it was good. also, there were some red villagers which were idle. you should have put them to work if you forgot.
There were some problems. when the Cease Fire is invoked, it last too long and when the battle is supposed to begin, the Cease Fire prevents the battle from happening for a while. Also, when the Pharaoh Sacrifaces his life, and the guardian appears to fight, is too late. because sometimes when the Guardian appeared, the battle was already over. maybe putting more units for player 2 would fix the problem.
Also, to clear Dialog Box, make another dialog with the two period (:) some times it was kind of annoying to see the last dialog which sometimes was "........." for the entire time.
Map Design: 3
The map was kind of empty with mostly one color. and used some eyecandy in some parts. but some parts were kind of empty. however, it was kind of good since you put so many units more details to the map would have made it more lagger. you should have put the buildings of players 1,2,3 facing different directions.
No need for instructions nor objectives since it was only cinematic.
The story was good. not the best one ever. but good.
Additional Comments: you should have put this file in the single player scenario section. Also, give more details so people can know what they are downloading.
by the way bigjt123, by doing that comment, you are spamming this file by announcing your other scenario. you should erase it.
I think you post it this same scenario before. on single player download section.
[Edited on 01/19/04 @ 09:46 PM]
Posted on 02/20/05 @ 06:00 PM
I say it was pretty good for your first one. Everyone starts somewhere.
aom expert Staff
Posted on 03/09/17 @ 01:29 AM
Putting this here because I accidently retracted the review above.