This is a preview of my upcoming campaign, Thiens Journey. the campaign MIGHT feature dialog, it will feature custom music, and it will have animations. i hope you like this! (its my first post! *gulp*...)
UPDATE: i'm going to start posting on how well the actual campaign is going. Feel free to comment!
Campaign progress: 16% i'm currently on 2nd scenario, doing work on the city.
-trying to figure out why the hell it keeps shutting down...
-fixing bugs/ misspelings
cant see much about this. only cinematic preview(duh!). i didnt like how it ended. render sky was still activated with a camera angle of 5 or 10 degrees, which allowed me to go all over the map. the game did not end. so i consider that as sort of like playability.
as i stated above, only cinematic, so it deserves a normal rating.
the story seems kind of good. nice convinations of songs, as well as some nice dialogs. the first part during the fighting, fade to black flashes were to fast, and didnt mixed with the ambient.
during the cinematic of the mountain and forest, the camera went through trees and mountains.
Map Design: 2
i base this rating by looking at the scenario on the editor and on in-game. it looked very average, in needed more details. eccept for the fighting part, that part really doesnt need many details since it might make it even more lagg. but a few add ons would do the job.
all i can say story is good, dialogs were fine, but not that outstanding.
Additional Comments: i was impressed that you gave a 4.8, so thats why i decided to review it. even if a really really good designer makes a preview, it shouldnt get rated less than 4.5, since its just a preview, you cant play it, and it doesnt show the entire story, is just a summary.