I'm Noepje, any comments on my playing style or greatly appreciated! If you want to learn how to go heroic in 8 mins, check this game out! It can be done faster though, I've seen it happen under 7.30 mins once.
Also check out how USEFUL the mercenaries are. You need to extensively use the market for that.
I'm giving this a 3 because there are better examples of a Ra FH in the recorded game section, and because the fighting starts too late.
Your problem Noepje is that you don't take advantage of having a fast heroic. It takes you 10:00 to build your midol, 12:30 before you start attacking, and when you do attack, you're destroying buildings when you should be hitting his villagers. You should practice until your first attack occurs closer to 10:00, which means building that midol faster.
Instead of building mercs to counter jarls, you should have had a couple of barracks up, pumped out spears or axes, and retreated your chariots. Also, never, ever retreat your mercs or let them stand around. Mercs don't live long, so for as long as they live, they should be attacking.
I noticed several times that you sieged without support. That's fine if there's no military around, but that wasn't the case here. When enemy military is around, siege with at least spears or axes to protect them. And try to gather 2-3 siege together before using them, the effects are dramatically better.