It definetly has a good selection to play with along with the Wonder, etc. An experienced person would struggle to beat this on Titan Mode!
There is enough balance to even things out, everyone starts fair enough, and it's plain and simple with normal storyline, at the worst you can be beat easily if you are a beginner!
The Creativity here is good because it mixes with the desert area and Set, whom it the starting point. The defendature and uncomplimentary Osiris makes it vunerable but understandable to a certain extent. Could be improved?
Map Design: 5
I congratulate you on this, a lot of work has come into this and you can clearly see why. The waterfall to the beach, the sea to the winds, Fantastic!
Here is where it lacks, the storyline is average, you can see a connectivity between the overall affectiveness of the Parties but it lacks depth and information. Imagination and more time could be spent to develop these ideas and to improve the wow factor of the game. This is the basis of the foundation of a good map-line etc.
Touching perfect with a hint of storyline, Well Done on your first major scenario!
P.S Just noticed the similarity between our names but RV in my name stands for Master Reviewer because I have done over 1,300!