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Laugh Out Loud(test version)

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richygorgan
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Version: AoM: The Titans
This is my first scenerio an i am 13 so expect it to be bad, its a mixed up game and trys to be funny but it really isnt, its 25% done and im releasing it now so people can test it, and see if i should carry on making it
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LuCkyMaN Well, I've seen alotta first scenarios.Yours is probably the best first scenario I've seen.
Try adding some eye candy/more terrain and add some kinda storyline.It was more cute than funny though lol.It has possibility if you added more to it and some sounds.Superwoman could of been funny if you would find a way to hide the meteor using camera angles maybe I dunno.Maybe you could use a heka for that they are good for making ppl fly and if you shrunk the heka u wouldnt see it but it would still send her flying.Add some more to superwoman scene like"I can fly" and then fall that would be good.I'm not sure if you planned one big storyline.If you planned on making it a whole bunch of diff story's I would state it jsut for some clerification.Try making mini stories that tie in together somehow.
richygorgan
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Thanks for your comment but i have decided not to carry on, anyone who wants to finish the design they can, but give me a little thanks to :). As for me im going to make another scenerio
richygorgan
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any more comments or ratings


comments with help me improve in my future scenerios
LuCkyMaN Oh,I won't waste my time next time.
Reinfire
Rating
2.6
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Balance2.0
Creativity4.0
Map Design3.0
Story/Instructions2.0
Playability: 2
Well, I was not sure what I had to do exactly. Obviously i couldnt destroy the entire camp with only 1 kastor. There is an allied army next to the camp, but it stands there without attacking.

Balance: 2
Well, since I didn't know what to do exactly, its hard to give a good balance, but as Kastor alone its impossible to destroy the camp, and if you have the army somehow, its way too easy. But I don't know what you have to do with the army, so I may be wrong in this

Creativity: 4
The cinematics you made were not even that bad. I have seen better ones, but its not bad for a first scenario. Also I thought that the villagers who walked in the camp and were killed by the lightning statues were pretty nice. Your creativity is not bad

Map Design: 3
Well, the map was pretty much empty, except for some things in the corners. But at least you have some eye-candy (the Thor hammer shafts as a path for example) And the terrain were the cinematics start is not bad

Story/Instructions: 2
I couldnt see a real story in your game, and the game also lacks instructions, which leads to that people dont know what to do exactly. But you still get one point for the fact that you get some information from the NPC's in the beginning

Additional Comments:
When I made this review, I was objective and I didnt gave you extra points because this is your first scenario. But like someone else commented it earlier, it's not the worst first scenario there is. I am sure that your second one (if there is gonna be a second one) will be better. To help you, I'll give you some tips to improve your scenarios:

- Make Instructions, or else people wont know what they have to do, and dont like to play it much.
- Fill up the map, empty maps dont look very proffessional, and If you dont need much space, you can make make the map size smaller, so the map will be filled better. Also if you make things a little bit outside the corners, the map is filled faster.
- Make more to do, besides the enemy camp, there is not much to do on the map. The game needs to be longer than just one enemy camp.

I hope I havent been to critical about this map, but if you follow these instructions, you will surely get higher ratings than this one

Greets from Reinfire



richygorgan
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reinfire didnt read the top

its a test version to see if i should carry on making it IT WAS ONLY 25% DONE
and i must of gone wrong some where because:
kastor should start hitting the gate, once thats done u go though the broken gate,then to the army which isnt active, and then the army is yours
tarmo_flake Argh! stupid scenario!!!!

The dogs making love was good, Superwoman was good (but she needs talk).

You can't finish the scenario because Amanra never dies...
igotproblems you can (i have at least)
igotproblems Oh yes the dogs are lesbians - how could i forget?
richygorgan
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^ i say you should edit your review and put it worst the playablity is not a 3 it deseves a 1
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Rating
2.6
Breakdown
Playability2.0
Balance2.0
Creativity4.0
Map Design3.0
Story/Instructions2.0
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Size:57.16 KB
Added:03/06/05
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