This map was not fun. All you had to do was send a large army into a small "pen" where you find and kill the very small Army of Kamos. There are, simply put, no triggers in the game. Kamos just sits there and waits to be slaughtered. This only gets a 2 because there were no bugs.
Your forces are about 25x larger than Kamoses' Army, thus making the map very unbalanced. Also, you can sit on your butt making troops as long as you like: Kamos just sits in his small enclosure waiting for you to kill him and his army. So... a 1 in balance.
Take your army and kill other army. Taken. Kamos attacks Atlantis. Taken. Kamos controlling the "Kamoses Pirates." Taken. Everything in this scenario comes from somewhere else, whether it be another scenario or the campaign. So creativity gets a 1.
Map Design: 1
No eyecandy. There are 2 terran types (atlantis tile and forest floor palm) and no scenery, unless small plots of palms counts a scenery. Threre are buildings randomly scattered about. No meshing. No grass. No rocks. No water. No foilage. 1 in map design.
The scenario actually has instructions! The story is not well developed so story does not affect the rating. I would give you a three, but there are spelling errors abound in the instructions. Therefore it gets a 2 in Story/Instructions
Not a very good scenario, but keep trying and you can make something better. Keep at it and good luck on your next scenario!