Calm- Rating 4.5
I liked this one a lot, especially how crystal blue the water is. 0.5 points subtracted because of the toolbar being visible. Other than that, cool screenshot!
Clumbsy Skiers- Rating 2.5
OK, but nothing absolutely amazing. Also, those shadows from the objects look very unrealistic. It's OK though. 0.5 points subtracted for same reason as the first.
Fire & Ice 2- Rating 2.0
Umm... it's OK. I suppose. It really doesn't look like the fire giant is pushing him off, looks more as if he's roaring/yawning/doing yoga, and the clumbsy Frost Giant falls off on his own. The yellow bar looking things on either side of the giant really look bad. Again, 0.5 subtracted.
Fountain- Rating 2.5
Erm... "Groovy," but there really needs to be more. One of the main keys of eyecandy is attention to detail, and this screenie doesn't have much detail. 0.5 subtracted as above.
Toilet Problems- Rating 4.5
Ha ha ha! That one's a pretty funny one. I like the gaia flowers (feces all over the floor, water all over as the other guy digs out the plumbing, funnny. I love the design of the toilet, and how the guy is actually sitting on it. The "urinal" is also funny. Would be 5.0, but as above 0.5 subtracted.
So, if you average those, you get 3.2, which rounds down to 3.0 average. Some things to improve on next time...
-Get rid of the toolbar
-Attention to detail like in the toilet one.
-"Eye Catching" effects
And some things you did well..
-Using lighting in screenshots
-Good humor use
Keep up the good work!
Posted on 06/10/05 @ 04:47 AM
They were good but compared to your last set of screenshots they weren't that great