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The Building of Kalle

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Chaptermaste
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Style: Role Playing Strategy
# of Scenarios: 6
Version: AoM: The Titans
This is only a demo so don't be too harsh there is room for improvemnt i just wanted to release my campaign in a demo before I had done too much of it to see what people thought of it please ignore any spelling mistakes as I am a bad speller. Also the first mission is a little boring but it helps with the second mission all the missions are labelled as mission 1, mission 2, mission 2 ending, and so on... .I have not worked out how to use the campaign creator so you will have to play this as scenarios .I have included a screen shot of the dwarf city in the demo.

The Campaign follows a captain called Henry who runs a Dwarf village. You start away from your village learning the teachings of a Dwarf instructer....

(update)
I have taken advice and made image jpeg so it is smaller.
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Deep_Al Im dnling it now!

4 some reason my campaigns and stuff havent come!!!!!

MY MAPS ARE AWSOME!!!
Ghostkeeper It's pretty good. Please go on with it.
I suggest though that, if you want to include screenshots, you save them as a jpg or a png. Bitmap is the heaviest universal picture format there is in the world of computers. People with a slow connection will have to wait a lot longer to download this.
Chaptermaste
File Author
Thanks for saying its good. Sorry about the screen-shot I'll make it jpeg next time. Any advice on ways to improve would be welcome. Also I got some ideas but any extra onces would be useful for the story plot.
Chaptermaste
File Author
I have made the screen-shot jpeg so that its smaller enjoy
please add comments
nottud I have rated it as an average of all the files excluding the unfinished one

Playability: 5
It is very playably and very fun. Not seen many maps like it

Balance: 5
The game is very balanced and very fair with a very good learning curve

Creativity: 5
the creativity is very good, alot of eyecandy (probably got alot better eyecandy than my maps)

Map Design: 4
The map design is good by it could be better, it's a little confusing at parts but other than that it's very good

Story/Instructions: 5 (would be 4.5 but you can have it)Superb story with great understanding. Excellent cimatics with alot of cleaver tricks and tecniques used. The slight downside is that some of messages in the story flash on and off the screen too quickly to read.
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Additional Comments:
Excellent Campain!

A MUST DOWNLOAD!!!

[Edited on 12/19/05 @ 01:06 AM]

Paperfriend
Rating
2.4
Breakdown
Playability4.0
Balance2.0
Creativity2.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions2.0
Playability: 4
Next to unreadable english the maze master was able to smash units on the hills were to couldn't escape and you didn't use the set obsure units trigger

Balance: 2
Very one-sided, to easy overall. Its fine if a scenario is easy but this was just boring. Its hard to balance things out but hero army vs myth army doesn't work.

Creativity: 2
You used quite a few triggers and you made this so I cant give you a 1 however there was nothing special. You did nothing to make your scenario look special.

Map Design: 2

Plain terrains, cave entrance's can be walked through at the sides, ugly buildings, you didn't have the feeling you were underground and threre were army's just standing still doing nothing.

Story/Instructios: 2

The story you have now is decent, yet linair. Events just fall straight out of sky and this is extra notable by very bad lines. Next to the lines not sounding right there is also the problem of the lines, that after close observation, seem to be the most horrible english I ever saw.

Additional comments:

You still have plenty of room for improvement. I suggest reading some guides and playing other people scenario's for inspiration. You already know your triggers and thats a good start. If your willing you will improve ;).

[Edited on 12/12/05 @ 02:10 PM]

Paperfriend Further on: Nottud you review will be reported for being to short.
Chaptermaste
File Author
First- Ok first things first this is a demo, you dont rate demo's
second- I play loads of scenarios by others but I don't want the terrain too detailed as I only have dial up and I hate big downloads but will think about making better eyecandy
third- Thanks about the maze master bit I'll sort that out.
fourth- I know there's no storyline at the moment as that's not in the demo
fifth- How's this not creative there's far more than 1 idea on it is that not creative? Don't be so unfair in your comments.
sixth- For god's sake, I am not paid to make these things so don't compare them to people's maps who are.I do this in my free time for others to enjoy.
Chaptermaste
File Author
Oh an by the way don't complain about my english is you can't spell yourself look at your comment...

[Edited on 12/15/05 @ 05:17 PM]

hollanj good on ya i agree with you chaptermaste i thought your scenarios were quiet good and even if it were rated it deserves betta dan a 2.4 rating
paperfriend u havent submitted anything since april n uve only submitted multiplayer scenarios
Trust me dis is a good demo. continue with it and dont listen to the minority
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Rating
2.4
Breakdown
Playability4.0
Balance2.0
Creativity2.0
Map Design2.0
Story/Instructions2.0
Statistics
Downloads:926
Favorites: [Who?]0
Size:3.50 MB
Added:12/03/05
Updated:12/07/05
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