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The Lost Relic - (demo)

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crag09
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# of Scenarios: 1 (for now)
Version: AoM
hello

this a level from my campaign. please leave a comment. please bare in mind i am only 13. it is all about aggamenmon and ajax. the followers of set have taken a relic from aggamenmon. it is your job ( in the 1st scenario) to destroy a temple and set sail fro egypt) the full version will include problems and puzzles that you must overcome. please tell me what you think but bare in min its my 1st 1. thankyou for downloading

crag09
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DWIEEB Age has no conditions on affecting the skill or will of an individual.

Ok here's what I found -

The gameplay is almost shorter than the cinematic. The cinematic should have more exciting parts in it. I would also suggest working on capitolization. It makes it hard to read when words aren't capitolized or even spelled right. If you have to, I would go as far as looking them up in a dictionary just so the players of my scenario can have a more enjoyable time. There's really no eyecandy in the map, and I would suggest that. While I was playing your scenario for the past 3 minutes or less, I was only seeing texture Grass A and a couple oak trees. I really can't tell you how important it is to make the map look truly as best as you can, even if it means it takes you more than a couple minutes to make. If you need inspiration, download all of Oscar's Files. I think we can all learn a lesson or two from the master. I hope to see you making more maps in the future.

Also bear in mind that if this offends, it's not supposed to and it's called constructive critizism. The only way to get better is learn from your mistakes.

~ DWIEEB

[Edited on 12/23/05 @ 09:18 PM]

crag09
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im really sorry it was not to you standard and yes you are right the cinematics are boring but i dont know how to get a close up like in the real campaign. im only 13 and i only got aom 6 weeks ago.

i think i might give up making campaigns and find another hobby thats not related to aom.

sorry again and thanx

[Edited on 12/24/05 @ 03:32 AM]

jml @ crag09
Keep practicing, please. And one day, when you'll get a beautiful 5 rating, remind me to show you my first scenario! Even my dog, my trully best friend... fell asleep when he playtested it. I can understand since he is the one who introduced me to AOM... We get along fine now, but things have never been the same since that awful day... Merry Christmas!
crag09
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thankyou jml you have made my day


merry christmas to you to

Gun head Please post this in the SINGLE PLAYER SCENARIOS, newbie. Well, I'm a newbie as well, but I have experience in designing maps ( Too bad I can't post them because I've finished so few of them ).
hollanj You cinematic and dialog were very impressive 4 a newbie. The map looks nice but you must learn to use the triggers "Unit Work" (makes villager work on a resources)and "Set ANimation" makes the units in the movie peform an animation often looking like they're talking. You needed to have more population at da start and town centres you could build on. Im not sure if u had an AI I won straight away buy running past the medusas, destroying 1 wall then the temple. Very good though I didnt even learn how to use triggas 4 ages.
PS: check out my upcoming campaign "Troy: The Real story"
wakain I'm just 14.
so I think DWIEEB's somment about ages's right.
nickleback94 I think that it was very good for a newbie. You're a lot better at making scenarios than me. (Beleive me, I'm rubbish!) But the only thing I think isn't great is the cinematic, (which a few other people have mentioned) as it is a little boring. Just maybe swivelling the camera around as they speak could make quite a difference. Also it is very short the whole game and there isnt many triggers etc.

But all in all it is excellent if that was one of your first scenarios.

[Edited on 04/17/06 @ 01:24 PM]

nickleback94 Hi again. I've just found a bug. When my army goes next to my lighthouse, a message comes up saying: 'You are deafeated' and gives you the usual options to replay scenario, go to campaign menu etc.

I don't know whether it's just my computer or it happens to others aswell, but maybe you should look into this when your not too busy.

[Edited on 05/06/06 @ 08:00 AM]

MythicRuler to get a closeup press the + to the far right of the keyboard and a - to zoom out. It would also help to dowload the x editor.
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