This is the first level to my new campaign about gargerensis before he knew arkantos. you are gargarensis and set has told you to destroy isis followers. some nice cinematicsbut this is only my second one so im still a newb. comments appreciated. enjoy
hey crag09 gd effort on submitting another scenario. The storyline was well set up and the map design wasnt too bad although you shouldnt use AOM to create the map for you.
You should have the enemy attacking you! Its boring with no challenge. The relic monkey should have disappeared wen the guardian awakened and you also forgot to change his name to "Set". You are a good designer i just think you need a few areas to work on.
Posted on 01/10/06 @ 06:52 PM
Please to see you're still around!
You asked for comments and that's a good thing. And, I would suggest you leave a public e-mail address in your profile.
My opinion, just an opinion, since I am no God: Cines are a little fast and jerky. About long and smooth travellings at ground level for exemple... We have no time to read dialogs, even if english is only my 8th langage.
It's very... basic ( details and story ) and can be done in... a very little time. As this... surprise is one of the most powerful of AOM... Map a way too big for that.
Beside? I would say it's a good second scenario. Choose well your hero, and spend a little time with him, to know him well enough to make us being interested. I just hate this Gargarentis dude... Did I tell you this story about my first scenario... and my dog?
[Edited on 01/10/06 @ 07:03 PM]
crag09 File Author
Posted on 01/11/06 @ 03:05 AM
thanks its really nice just to have some positive comments. it mskes my day. i agrre with you the cinematics and not brill, i think i rushed them cus i was so excited. how do you change t guardians name to set and how do you get the monkey to dissapear. ta again
Posted on 01/11/06 @ 09:44 AM
Hey crag download reyk's editor version 9. That way you can change unit size, change camera position and much more. A shortcut: