I would give you about average here. There are some nice idears here but there is still room for improvement. Most of the improvement is mainly the terrain and objects arounf the actual dam and bridge. It is a bit plain with too much grassA! Try mixing up the terrain, add water objects and pahaps adjust the evelvation a little. Also, on the bridge, make it so the wall sticks out over the edge of the land so it overhangs the water slightly. That will make it look better. On the actual bridge, I would advise changing the terrain on the bridge where you can see it so match the bridge more! for you dam, my best advice would be yo make the water go closer to the edge of the dam and or just simply make the wate behind it more obvious when taking the actual screenshot! A slight question is what is that strip of grass that goes under the water at the front of the dam supposed to be?
Very good, things to possibly improve:
#Mix terrain more
#Add more objects in the water and land
#Make water go closer to edge of dam
#Match bridge terrain to the actual bridge itself
#Make the actuall bridge flat rather than it tilting to the right
#Pahaps take the screenshot at a lower pitch to add to the effect!
Posted on 07/07/06 @ 07:12 AM
It's alright.. But they are just ideas taken from guides, and neither are executed well. You need to take time making sure it looks natural, mixing terrains, adding little details etc.
Some grass is showing in the centre of your bridge, and you always use the default terrain and water. Also, the waterfall's look oddly placed..
There's definently room for improvement, but at least your giving it a shot.
Posted on 04/13/08 @ 03:59 PM
I think you could have done better. Like there was no texture at all. You could have at least made the bridge and damn look better.