this is my first scenarion ever so please dont be to harsh while yelling at me that it sucks. its not very good if u ask me... storyline is lacking in this one but i hope to make it better in the second one. infact im gonna be improving alot of things in the next one. right now though there isnt anything unique about this, just ur standard rpg except no levels. well i hope you enjoy it if you even bother to download it
hmmmmmmm... You are right. You need to develop the storyline more. And then i was able to do everything out of order because of the sky passages. I jumped in one and out one which was almost destroyed grabbed weapons and killed all minotaurs. Freed everyone and destroyed the gate gaurd and then they all died!!! The gate stayed there even though there was a cine of something on other side. Then i used one sky passage to leave and cound this big relic and it said bring to temple to destroy everyone or something so I carried it around and got attacked by about a billion fire giants. I got back in the sky passage and went to the one that opens at athens, got out and killed everyone and then found some more relics and when I got to a corner it says go to a temple and a temple lights up and a gate converts. I brought the relic to the temple and won. I didn't use half the map which i know was filled up and I did everything backwards. And it said something about killing a bunch of people too and i didn't do that either. The only thing i had a chance to find wrong was the fact that the gate didn't open (if it is supposed to) and that you owned all the sky passages from the start. You need to convert at distance or something. Or did i just do it wrong?
Sesharoo File Author
Posted on 07/24/06 @ 08:28 PM
um ya those sky passages were for me testing it and i forgot to delete them after i submited it >< sry bout that. i suggest playing it through again and ignoreing the passages they shouldnt even hav been there. any way i updated it and they should be gone now
Posted on 07/25/06 @ 02:30 PM
Oh yay lets take our hero against a few heroes and a few regular units and tons of myth units. Kind of boring, no real strategy to it. Maybe make a relic that will destroy half of the enemy units in the maze place.
You just go through and kill all the myth units with your hero and your done. Its a little easy because you get so many restorations. How many do you get by the way?
The story has potential but it is underdeveloped. Maybe explain why he needs help from the gods. Or make a prologue scenario about why he was sent to tarturus. I felt it had ok eye-candy. Not too much not too little.
Map Design: 4
Cool eye-candy in the town, not much anywhere else though. It was just walls or tiles or whatever (of course I'm terrible with it so I shouldn't be talking. I liked the groups of people just standing there. But maybe make it more interactive. Like click on someone and a conversation will start. Maybe click on a villager and they'll flirt with you. Now that would be fun lol.
As I said before the story line is undeveloped. Work on that. The directions can be a little vague sometimes too. Make objectives instead of just chatting things to you.
Additional Comments: I think you have potential, keep up the good work. Oh, I forgot to mention, in the last chat about the aztec gods it says coming fo the aztec gods not coming of
[Edited on 08/04/06 @ 02:52 AM]
Sesharoo File Author
Posted on 07/25/06 @ 06:29 PM
wow thanks for the comments thats a lot better then i expected to get, and u get 1 resotration every 5 min mostly to keep u alive and i was to lazy to find a better way at the time, and the second one will be better i promise =P