hey fellow Thor player,
I respond to your request and here are my comments:
+ First of all, your all dwarf BO is completely wrong. You're using dwarves to herables, wood and hunt. Wrong, wrong, wrong.
Here's the stats for gathering dwarf vs vil:
So, as you can see dwarves are better only for gold, and should be used to gather other resources only in certain situations and for limited time.
+ You advanced around 6 mins against an Attie?
For such a hunting map, you should always use 7 villies hunting with HD & pig sticker, 3-4 villies on wood and the rest dwarves AQed on gold. This will get you to age up around 4:40 to 5 mins.
+ You FBed an Oranos? it was certain to lose your FB and the game. But your opponent was a n00b, and this was evident from the beginning when your ulf killed his Oracle that came into your base. Then, he spammed cheiroballistae and murmilo mostly, instead of Turmanizing the map.
+ You lost your 2nd FB, cause you had only 2 of your 3 rax working and producing RC and TA, while the temple produced Hersir. So it was easy for him to win the 2nd battle also, despite your 6 Towers (!!!) and not using at all the Forest Fire, nor the 9 RC in the back of your base.
+ You managed to go Skadi, while your n00b opponent wasn't attacking, or fruitelessly attacking and losing units. You were contained in the 1/4 of the map, without gold and he didn't build the other 2 settlements, but kept on fighting with 2 TCs and 1 Temple, 2crax, 1rax & 1palace for unit production.
Oh, and he also had 11 citizens & 1 citizen hero gathering.
+ Your first raid (gosh, you're Norse remember?) came at 32 mins with 4 hit RC, when he was building his Titan gate. Then you attacked and won, cause he had no gold-wood-food to replace his losses.
+ The game had almost 0 micro from both sides, and very poor strat decisions -like the placement of markets by both of you (and no market animals working).
All in all, I'd say it was a game between 2 n00bs, who had no plan and just reacted to the other guy.
You have to work on your BO, and the general plan for all Norse is to raid with RC the enemy all the time, withdraw and come back again.
For more info, check out Deathandpain's comments on the forums about Thor, he's the best Thor today, and also check out some of the recs to see how other guys do it. That's what I do, and it's helped me tremendously to improve.
All comments were made in good will, and wanting to help a fellow Thor.