I would love to be an author one day, so your comments on my saga are important to me. What's good, what could be improved etc. etc. Please remember that this is the first book I ever wrote and that it is far from perfect grammatically or anything like that.
What's that other one about? Also do you have msn? If so what's your msn account? so I can add you to msn.
[Edited on 10/19/06 @ 10:36 PM]
Posted on 10/20/06 @ 07:00 AM
MythWriter File Author
Posted on 10/22/06 @ 09:18 AM
my second book's called "coming of the strangers" and is based on the redwall series by brian jacques
*lol* okay so it's not 100% original but the storyline and characters are mine...just not the geographical setting.
anyway this series revolves around an abbey called redwall and creatures like mice, squirrels, hares, moles and stuff live in it. however theyre only animals who live in britain.
somehow a bunch of prairie dogs find their way to redwall but hot on their tails is an evil tribe of mink sworn to destroy the prairie dogs once and for all...even if it means tearing redwall abbey stone from stone...
if u want to know more than u gotta buy the book when its done.
that is if i get permission from bj the author.
Posted on 10/23/06 @ 12:11 AM
Do you have a place to get the book published? :p
Posted on 10/23/06 @ 10:46 PM
lol ive been reading redwall a bit
Posted on 10/24/06 @ 07:07 AM
Well if finlly finished reading it it is as i said before AWESOME!! Few errors not that many. Any way good luck with you're next book!!!
Posted on 11/13/06 @ 07:22 AM
It was a very good "book".There are a few flaws in the writing which cause the reader to be frustrated a little bit, wondering what the real word is.There were very good new concepts analyzed with the game experience. Example: Because in the tutorial level hunt for the killer, they hunt a cyclops right? In your book it says they came from the Cyclopean raid, which was a very good idea.
Have you made up the other things like Zethos being Arkantos's Brother?
Posted on 12/15/06 @ 03:59 AM
probably so. MAKE A TT ONE.
MythWriter File Author
Posted on 12/22/06 @ 11:45 AM
Pik001, I'll make a TT one when I get the expansion!!!
I can't DL anything because i have this dumb vanilla AOM version...augh...but i'll try.
Zethos was my invention, as was Niordsir the Norseman (in the giant tree one with chiron the norseman says he's niordsir remember?), Replos, the stony-faced and greedy soldier, Ranillos of Ioklos...
Posted on 12/30/06 @ 04:27 PM
Wow, it's very cool! I can't wait for the Titans Book!