I would love to be an author one day, so your comments on my saga are important to me. What's good, what could be improved etc. etc. Please remember that this is the first book I ever wrote and that it is far from perfect grammatically or anything like that.
It was a very good "book".There are a few flaws in the writing which cause the reader to be frustrated a little bit, wondering what the real word is.There were very good new concepts analyzed with the game experience. Example: Because in the tutorial level hunt for the killer, they hunt a cyclops right? In your book it says they came from the Cyclopean raid, which was a very good idea.
Have you made up the other things like Zethos being Arkantos's Brother?