Nice job, crag09. The camera tracks were nice and smooth and in general, the map design looked very nice. Though, I do have a few suggestions. First, I'd suggest taking out some of the fall trees as they don't seem to fit in. Perhaps replace them with tundra trees. Then maybe replace the pigs with deer or caribou. The units should be modified to walk a little faster so that they can keep up with the camera tracks. The tunnel in the water was a bit sloppy, align the mine walls to make it a bit more even. The villager who was praying in front of the shrine was a nice touch. Your other units seemed a bit boring and motionless. Play around with the animation viewer to give your units fun animations. Though, shrink the temple more or move it under the shrine so that it is not visible. Finally, add sound and perhaps some sort of a storyline to make your cinematic great.
For the most part, your map was very impressive. I liked the river, the gold mine, and the terrain mix.
Hope to see more work from you! :-)
crag09 File Author
Posted on 01/23/07 @ 02:09 PM
Hey thanks. :) this is my first one so illl bring you more :)