apart from the poor spelling and grammar in the text, rather extreme swearing at the heros mother by the hero, and a storyline that is a bit questionable a great job!
for your first scenario the trigger work and eye-candy are well above average for a first try. If you tone down the aggresion in your scripts this would be really good.
(maybe add a trigger doing negetive damage to ajax (healing him) so he dosent die at the end?)
tyranius10 File Author
Posted on 02/08/07 @ 02:52 PM
oh that part is a glitch he wasnt supposed to die ^^thanks for the review this was really my first try.I am nice at triggers but i suck in eye candy.
Posted on 08/13/07 @ 06:27 PM
I haven't and can't download this (don't have AoM Chocolate) but in response to that bug that you said about the hero dying in the shadows... try using a trigger that is fired at the time of the cinematic with the effect Unit Create: Revealer To Player in the usual darkened area. This should brighten things up a bit.