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Ornlu part1

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Richard123456
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Version: AoM: The Titans
Bandits attack the Shrine of the Northern woods and force to tell them about Ornlu. The Bandits take the priest to their camp. Skrealing (his son) sees when come to the shrine the dead bodies of his fathers guards. Is he able to save his father?
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joenot443 YES!!! DOWNLOAD #3!!!! I'LL RATE LATER!
Richard123456
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No stars at the first day?
god of myths this looks interesting i'll download and review.
god of myths i liked it, even though i didn't finish it. how do you get past the trolls because once
i killed one of them i got defeated. also are the frost giants enemy's or allies? sorry i didn't post a review.
Richard123456
File Author
I think you've lost because Skrealing died.
If he is killed, you are automaticly defeaded.
And the Frost Giants are allies, but if I made them allies in the begining, you would see them. DO you have more questions about it?

[Edited on 04/23/07 @ 11:42 AM]

Richard123456
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Come on, rate it!
nickleback94
Rating
4.0
Breakdown
Playability4.0
Balance3.0
Creativity5.0
Map Design4.0
Story/Instructions4.0
Playability: 4
The main reason this mark isn't five is because if players go too far into the troll cave by mistake, they are dead meat. Maybe after the warning about them you could make an invisible wall until you kill the pigs.

I also gave this a four because at the part where players need to go back to the rune I didn't know what it meant, so I was a bit stuck at this bit for a while. You could make the instructions a bit clearer. (I'll talk about this more later.) Also, the pig bit was slightly complicated, instead of typing in that phrase couldn't players just delete them?

And finally, when I just knocked down all the buildings in this opponents town, I won without freeing the preist. I'm not sure if you intended this to happen but it did.

Apart from these facts I found it enjoyable.

Balance: 3
I know this is quite low. The reason for this is that the bit after the frost giants is too easy. You should maybe make more units at the bandit camp.

Creativity: 5
Overall I'd say this was pretty good. It was a creative plot and I liked the sub-plot of helping the frost giants. I also enjoyed the winding paths through the forest and the cave.

Also, the pig killing is very original so full marks!

Map Design: 4
Like I said before, I liked the paths through the forest and the caves. I also thought the beginning cinematic was good. It ran smoothly, but I think you made it take too long for all of the hesirs (forgive my spelling) to die. Maybe lessen the amount of them slightly.

I didn't mark you down on this but there wasn't an ending cinematic for me. There might of meant to be if you won properly, (like I mightn't of - as I said before) but if there wasn't meant to be one then I suggest that you do do one in the future.

Story/Instructions: 4
If this was just the story then it would be a fantastic 5. I thought it was a very creative story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. BUT life isn't fair. The instructions weren't very clear, as I've mentioned, and their were some words missing in it which made it hard to understand.

Additional Comments:
I think you put a good amount of effort into this and I want to say that I definately will want to play Ornlu part 2 when it comes out.

[Edited on 04/28/07 @ 06:02 AM]

Aomts_help911 fix this stuff and maybe ill download and review.
Richard123456
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I'll work better on it at the second part. And I must admit, I am not good at English and sometimes I forget some word if quick type objectives.

The first time I played it by myself, I couldn't delete the pigs. That was the reason for that.

Afther the frost giants, i wanted to create more bandits but I thought that the opening cinematic wouldn't be correct with the amount of bandits in the camp later.

The last thing I want say is: Thanks for this first rating!
caribdus
Rating
3.8
Breakdown
Playability4.0
Balance4.0
Creativity4.0
Map Design4.0
Story/Instructions3.0
Playability: 4
I actually really enjoyed playing this game. It never really got boring because there was always something to do and the things that you had to do where very fun! The only improvement would be that the game was wuite short and cam to an abrupt end, but I quess that is because it is only Part 1!

Balance: 4
(I am not sure if balance means how easy or hard it was but...) I thought that this game was fairly easy some bits were very hard like the bits with the trolls in the cave, but the ending was fairly simple I still liked it though. That is why I gave it a 4.

Creativity: 4
I thought that this was very good it was all new ideas pretty much, I didn't really see anything from other games. I liked the story line and escpecially at the beginning I thought that was a very good start to the game.

Map Design: 4
I really liked the map design because it was jusn't just flat land everywhere with some trees dotted around it was alot better than that, my favourite bit of the map was the shrine I thought that it was very good, and very creative. Maybe you could have done a bit more work on the paths with rocks or something but I thought that the overall design was very good, especially for a map that was quite small. I think the map design is worth a 4.5.

Story/Instructions: 3
This is the bit were it lost a few marks as it where, they were fine up until the bits with the trolls and I wasn't sure what to do. I am not sure that was just because of the instructions, maybe a few invisble walls were needed in the cave. I thought that the story line flowed really well and it was easy to know the direction in which you were going.

Additional Comments:
Looking foward the next one in the series!!!
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Rating
3.7
Breakdown
Playability4.0
Balance3.3
Creativity4.0
Map Design3.7
Story/Instructions3.3
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Size:97.79 KB
Added:04/21/07
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