Common guy's, if you don't like the file, don't submit a half baked review on a file. The review's are worse than the file.
"reviews need to praise the designer for things that are done well and point out areas where the designer can improve"
Look a yonder: http://aom.heavengames.com/reviewguide/
It looks like you have been messing around, experimenting with what you can do. This is a good building block for a good scenario that could be made sometime soon, or a project down the road. But maybe you could keep things like this to yourself in future? It was good that you are showing us what you have achived through experimenting, but for your next submission maybe you could put in some extra eyecandy around the main objects, like a few trees and a few rocks.
good mixing, nice camera angles and great object sizing. Bad eyecandy.
Your getting there, but there is still a fair way to go. But I'm sure great cinematic skill will be hitting me in no-time ~ Khan