Ok no offense here, but it looks like youve just been experimenting in the editor. It is great that you are experimenting, but this does not really belong in the downloads section. I appreciate that you want to help people by creating this, but it looks like you have put absoluetly no effort into this and must have only taken a few minutes.
Ways you could improve are:
This map is crying out for a different terrain. It looks like you just dragged the water brush over the whole map and raised a bit for the wall and harbour. Maybe some coral or rocks jutting out of the sea?
What point did the revealers serve? They do not show up ingame and just make the map look a mess. The only good thing here was the two merged barracks that really could not have took longer than 10 seconds to make. Also the houses with the same as above.
There are no named triggers so it will be difficult to navigate. There are no high priority and the triggers you have added are basic and irrelevant to gameplay.
There is really nothing new in this map. It needs a wow factor to engage the designer and make them want to use it. It doesnt really have anything special whatsoever.
If this is your first map, do not let my comment discourage you from making more maps. If you focus on ways to improve, try, experiment and practise you can only get better :).
I hope this review will help you make better maps, if I have offended you in any way that was not my intention and I apologise. :)
Good luck in the future.
[Edited on 12/07/07 @ 01:38 PM]
Posted on 12/09/07 @ 09:52 AM
Not bad for a first scenario. What there needs to be is more stuff on the scenario. More buildings, decorations, etc that could make the scenario look like you have spent a lot of time on it.
For a first attempt not bad - keep up the good work!
vinnymb File Author
Posted on 12/14/07 @ 06:02 PM
I am not very good at makeing maps, so TY yeebaagooon. and TY nottud too. lol!
P.S. yeebaagooon, I really like your pwn the noob RPG. LOL!
Posted on 03/17/11 @ 01:22 PM
Well, its not too bad but it really need more things.
What should I say? it need a lot of things. Really a lot of them. Hey its just an idea but, how about if you try making embelishment with water things? like fishes, water lillys Waterfalls (Gaia wonders) and other things... so it will really be a good thing to watch over.