1) You need a readme or help file in the .zip file - something that helps the guy who has downloaded it know where to put it.
2) You need some music in the game; it just makes it more interesting (effect: music play).
3) You need more scenary, it is quite dull if you look at it - just green grass and snow with two rivers...
4) MORE TC's - There only 1 tc (town center) for blue (right in the middle) and only 1 for red (again, right in the middle)
5) What on earth did you do to the popcap limit! If you want to be able to get lots of units, set popcap limit to 300 and bonus pop to 300.
6) You need to sort out the cinematic badly! It actually does look pretty cool even though it goes on for a little too long but you NEED CINEMATIC MODE ON! (Effects : Cinematic mode -on-) - make sure you set an effect to turn it off again!
This could be a really good scenario if you fixed your problems; just spend 1/2 hour - 1 hour making it better, then update it on here + ppl will want it!