Could of been more creative. You could of matched the 'Iron City' Terrain with the grass and not just like put a blob over it... And shouldn't there be guards defending in the Iron City? The water fall was okay but you could put like fish, some boats, maybe even people or like a small village beside it.
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Posted on 05/14/08 @ 04:35 AM
thanks RAPTORS but i tell ya theres plenty more where that came from........
Posted on 05/14/08 @ 05:19 AM
You should have removed the extra menus and minimap so the pictures are clearer. The Iron city was nice but I totaly agree with Raptors, there should have been something else there not just grass out of nowhere. The waterfall is nice but it seems you only scaled the objects. It lacks more complicated eyecandy.
But these are your first ones so keep working on them and you'll get much better.
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Posted on 05/14/08 @ 06:15 AM
Well, the eyecandy was decent, but you didn't change the views or anything in the editor, which makes things look alot better. The ui was showing as well. I liked the building mixing.
I thought it was ok, especially if you were only muckin' around.
Posted on 05/14/08 @ 08:43 AM
he's missing tree's and plants.. so need it needs more nature :P
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Posted on 05/14/08 @ 09:04 AM
The Iron City (the gate at least) looks pretty cool, but the Waterfall is very very very cliché.
Also, try making screenshots on higher resolutions.