This is my first published work and I hope you enjoy it. This took me many hours to create and get all the triggers down right, and to test it over and over again. I would love to put a cinematic on in the beginning but im not quite sure how to build one, though my knowledge of triggers is pretty good. In this scenario you are the son of osiris and Osiris has sent you to eliminate some people that he has deemed dangerous or unworthy. This scenario requires patience and strategy. In at no time in this scenario should you have to use your son of osiris to attack anything directly. You will understand more as you play it. I hoped to give you enough direction to figure out what to do on your own, but still make it challenging. Please respond to as how i made the objectives. Not sure if they are too obvious as to what to do, or too hard. It's hard for me to judge becasue I know exactly what to do, becasue I made it. Just dont get your SoO hit, becasue one hit to him, and its game over. Please leave feedback! Enjoy! By the way, this is for "The Titans Expansion" only, it has things from the expansion and wont work on just AoM without the expansion.
I'll Create a cinematic for you ill just download and figure out the story line.
Posted on 08/03/08 @ 05:40 PM
The game was short, it was good enough but it is quite "new" like a nooby kind of thing. You could improve by including more Jobs or somehing like that
Balance was pretty plain, not much of it.
There was not to much creativity involved a lot of people are creating scenarios where you do jobs for the gods.
Map Design: 3
You need to learn Terrain Mixing, Without it your map is useless. Think about it, would you rather look at a block of green, or land that varies with terrain. Another thing is eyecandy rocks, trees ect.
These are some good examples: http://aom.heavengames.com/scendesign/eyecandy
The instructions were clear enough but making more jobs would have helped this mark
Additional Comments: I kinda liked it it was ok but as i said nooby. I marked you up for a first scenario.
[Edited on 10/16/08 @ 05:28 AM]
Posted on 08/03/08 @ 05:41 PM
Even though this is your first senerio i liked it. You need to work on your design skill but i playaed it to the end, keep making more maps you will get better at it.
Posted on 08/03/08 @ 05:51 PM
I know I was a bit harsh with my review because its your first scenario, but I only said that to help you improve. Keep making maps you'll get better. If you don't have it already get nottuds editor superpack and reyks editor pack:
[Edited on 10/16/08 @ 05:31 AM]
Jamal886 File Author
Posted on 08/06/08 @ 09:24 PM
That's not harsh at all. I am glad i got something above a 2. Harsh is when someone tells you something was bad but doesnt tell you a way to improve on what was bad. You stated ways to help which is greatly appreciated. Thanks for playing it!
Khan And Steak
Posted on 08/15/08 @ 10:03 AM
It's not harsh.. just short, please I don;t want to retract another review, please make it at least 3 lines (it's really not that hard)
*sigh*, JDmino, your review has been retracted because it does not comply with AoMH's Review Guidelines.
Read the Review Guide lines found at the top left corner of the page or at this location;
The main reason that it was taken away was that it was too short... strive to make it around 3 lines minimum.
Read up on them and I won't be bothering you again :D ~ Khan ~ Khan