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Death Sentence

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PoleRBear
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Style: Other
# of Scenarios: 4
Version: AoM: The Titans
Now Presenting... *Drum Roll* Death Sentence!!!

A Campaign created fully out of Cinematics!
This story follows the life of a young character and his father, who are surprisingly chosen to join the Spartan Army! A story of "MYTHIC" proportions not to be missed by anyone who likes good stories!
This contains the first 3 parts of the Death Sentence campaign, but there's still more to come!

Comments and Reviews are appreciated.

(If Any) :)
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PoleRBear
File Author
Wow! Fourteen people after the first day!
Best in my records!
PoleRBear
File Author
Omg! 34 downloads now! Amazing! As some might say, it's selling like hotcakes!

[Edited on 09/12/08 @ 05:29 AM]

Khan And Steak ------
As I said. I would appreciate comments and reviews after downloads. But I don't expect downloads and no comments or reviews.
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Then why did you restate it?
Also try not to double post, editing your main post or even your second post would have been better. Aside from all the cranky business, I'll download and check it out, it's got a nice name.
I would add a screenshot to you presentation to further expectations and interest. Also with the ReadMe I think you should say that it is extracted to the:

C:\Program Files\Age of Mythology\Scenario Directory

Because most people will put the files into the:

My Documents\My Games\Scenario Directory ~ Khan

[Edited on 09/10/08 @ 02:10 AM]

JDmino I do not think I will review this.
How many scenarios have you made? Because it is not the greatest. There is no terrain mixing or anything. The scenarios went for maybe 20 seconds each. You should look at Dopes Guide on Scenario making, you can find it here:
http://aom.heavengames.com/downloads/showfile.php?fileid=7492

There is also TombiTs Guide to terrain mixing Found here:
http://aom.heavengames.com/downloads/showfile.php?fileid=5230

These are really good guides, I learned a lot from them.
Also observe other peoples campaigns to see what is necessary for a good Campaign... I like the plot though.
I hope that helps :)
Khan And Steak I'll start with what I thought was good.
1. The storyline.
Very nice, it had a nice start and kept me interested all the way to the last second.
2. The names.
A lot of people normally have a lot of trouble with naming characters. I thought you choice of names where quite nice
3. Dialogue timing.
Nice, consistent with what was going on. Not too fast not too slow. This is something a lot of people struggle with.

And the not so good things.

1. Terrain mixing.
As was said before, horrible terrain mixing. Straight GrassA against straight GreekRoad does not look very good. Mix it up use lots of terrains, just make sure they go together. This was a big eyesore.

2. Portraits.
They didn't work! Not good, I think it's better to have not portrait then to have one that doesn't work. To get the portraits download Reyk's 'New X Editor 3'. It has a list of all the portraits, so all you have to do it copy it down into the portrait field (just be sure to keep the 'icons/' in there).

3. Sounds.
Okay this is kind of an optional thing, but I would definitely include it in a cinematic campaign. Use as many sounds as you can, where they would suit of course (don't just put random sounds in). Also have music running through the scenario's. This way it uses two of your 5 senses instead of just 1.

Great campaign looking forward to the following scenario's in the series. Follow what was said by JDmino and Myself and I think you'll produce a good campaign. Just remember do not rush it! Never rush something or it will turn out worse! ~ Khan
PoleRBear
File Author
Ok, Khan And Steak and JDmino. Here are the reasons for what happened wrong:

1. I'm a newbie and I admit it.

2. This is just a start of my big project. I'm wondering what people will think of it. That's why there's not much terrain mixing or anything when it comes to big details.

3. I can't seem to find out how to get the portraits in and working properly. If u could help me with that I would be very greatful. And you have, so thats good.

4. Some of my music, when I play it, it doesn't come out properly, to my misfortune.

And JDmino, I've already looked at Dope's guide. But the other one I haven't. I'll look into it. Thanx for the advice. =)

Also, get ready for the re-submit. The ending might blow your head off! Nah, just joking, but it's still going to be great! By then the terrain will be better by far and almost everthing will keep u interested.

[Edited on 09/12/08 @ 09:47 PM]

JDmino Nice too see that your willing to admit you need to improve, that can be a downfall in scenario making! Keep practicing you will get better over time.
PoleRBear
File Author
Heheh. Thx =>

But Khan+Steak, for your first send, can't screenshots only be added if it's a modpack?

[Edited on 09/12/08 @ 07:07 PM]

anstar10 ill download it im the guy who made boern from the hobbit good idea
PoleRBear
File Author
Heh. Once again, thanks for all the downloads, guys!

+, Anstar10, try my idea for actually making a mod. You'll (well... may) get very well known in the mod-making world.

And guy's, I'm seeing comments and no (well... not much except from Khan and Steak)ratings!

But all that have commented so far, you deserve an extra thanks.

[Edited on 10/01/08 @ 11:25 PM]

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