It was a great cinematic. Although short, it was preety good. I liked all of the things it offered, but there were some things that brought your rating down a bit.
The dialogue was something that bothered me. Every time the man said something, the "Fade to Color" kicked in and it was preety bothering.
The cuts and tracks were great, smooth and clear, and easy to follow. Also, you used icons to show who was talking, even though it was one person. Animations could have been added to enliven the cinematic and make the dialogue more interesting.
Nothing more in the cinematic besides that great music. The storyline was good, and the unit placing was great.
Besides this, there was not much eyecandy. The Atlantis Tile and the Walls of Troy were the most of the setting in the cinematic. The only part that was well designed was the ending scene. The palms and oak trees were placed evenly and it looked marvelous. It was greatly designed there.
Additional Comments: This was a great cinematic. Hope to see some more. Good job!