The screenshots were dull. There were no little details, and the map was all sandy and looked awfully unatracive. Try adding extra details to enliven the enviornment and make the scene more pleasing. Try terrain mixing. Mix different sandy terrains to get a better atmosphere and a better touch to your screenshots.
Posted on 09/11/11 @ 12:34 PM
The screenshots make your scenario pack look... Bad. I would not play any of these if I where forced at gun point. And to add on to the horrific shots, the dialogue had mediocre grammer.
The map looks bad, add some embelishment and eyecandy also... modify the dialogue to actually make sence. This could be a good campaign, so far however --->Phail