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Eragon- Prologue

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I_hak_yer_cmputr
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Version: AoM: The Titans
This is basically a cinematic of Eragon. I've done my best, and this is my first time submitting a scenario, so don't be afraid to share your suggestions with me.(i don't know WHY you'd be afraid, though. Oh man, I think I messed up there with that line) Read the book to fully understand.
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I_hak_yer_cmputr
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Yay! People are actually downloading!
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[Edited on 02/13/10 @ 09:11 AM]

Pheonix_Fire9 I have a question to ask you? (Its more like a offer though lol)

Can you please design and create or whatever scenarios with me. I am very skilled ive been playing this game for four years now.

P:S I wiil give you a example of my work.

Also i will be dowmloading this scenario or cinimatic.
I_hak_yer_cmputr
File Author
umm, okay.
Pheonix_Fire9 Still On?
Pheonix_Fire9 I dont need to offend you or whatnot but, its not brilliant.... You need to take more time on cinimatics espcialy the camera tracks and you need to put a Blue Sky and also you need to mix terrians such as you could use a stronger terrian and mix it in with a weak terrian.

P:S Dont Cramp Units Together Especialy trees.
I_hak_yer_cmputr
File Author
no offense taken. for some random reason, the 'Render Sky' trigger just isn't working for me. Okay Ill mix some terrain and try to clear up the cramping.
Bartholomeus @I_hak_yer_cmputr
I'll dl it, and give it a review.

@ Pheonix_Fire9
I've been playing for 6 years lol :)

[Edited on 06/24/09 @ 12:33 AM]

Bartholomeus Playability: 3
Since there is no gameplay, so I'll just give it a balanced rating.

Balance: 3
No Balance in here, since it is just a cinematic.

Creativity: 3
The Creativity is balanced.

Map Design: 2
The Map Design here is not very good, I know this is your first map submitted here, but I've a few tricks to improve your eyecandy designing skill, first, all you need is terrain mixing, mixing between grass, other grass, dirt and maybe other terrain. Second is grass, bushes, rock and stones placement, this will greatly improve the eyecandy. But still I like you placing trees around the cinematic, it will give a natural feelings.

Story/Instructions: 3
Inspired by LoTR, The Story is Balanced too. :)
Maybe you should make your own storyline, to make the rating bigger. Remember, Storyline is the Roots of a Map. ;)

Additional Comments:
For second map you already mastered the basics of cinematic, and that's great. So maybe a Balanced Rating will suit you.

If you want more tricks to eyecandy-ing a map, here is the link:

http://aom.heavengames.com/scendesign/mapdesign

or if you want to learn more about the basics:

http://aom.heavengames.com/scendesign/basics

to learn more about tips & tricks (This could be very useful if you already mastered the basics):

http://aom.heavengames.com/cgi-bin/forums/display.cgi?action=ct&f=13,24393,0,365

P.S. I don't get what you're telling in this map :p

P.S.S. I'm a RPG designer, so if you've ever need a help to make a RPG scenario, I'll be ready to help you.

[Edited on 06/26/09 @ 05:04 PM]

pharoh_elite If you're interested, you might want to check out the Prologue I started in 2007 for ideas on how it could be improved. It's not the best but it's a good starting point:

http://aom.heavengames.com/downloads/showfile.php?fileid=8255

you have to download the entire compilation but they're all worth checking to improve your scenario design capabilities.

good luck :)
Yeebaagooon
Staff
Bartholomeus, your review has been deleted because it does not comply with the review guidelines. Please read them.

http://aom.heavengames.com/reviewguide

:)

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