Well, I couldn't consider the gameplay as this is a cinematic, so I've considered the great laughs this scenario caused me :P. There is no lag in any part, and this is such a great thing for a cine (and for a game too). It is really fun, but I didn't give you a five as at the end it is a bit a list of things GuardofOlympus has done: "Then he found Spore Heaven", "Then he comes at Dawn of Fantasy Heaven"... It's not so simple to give a vote as there's not gameplay.
As I can't consider this point, I didn't know I I should give you a 1 or a 5, so I put a 3. But, as it's obvious, this part of the review is useless in this case.
It is a really creative map for me: I like how you put the RT forum so "secret" and the Ripto's sequence so similar to Codename Ripto's first mission, then the "Oh, a trigger!" and an effect coming, or the corruptor with a guardian. I know that probably this is not the first "Scenario Birthday Party", but it's really well made for me.
Map Design: 3
Well, I would have liked to see the Eyecandies a bit better done, example in the first sequence there are spaces covered with the GrassA that we all Scenario Designer hate, and some parts are just hills and mountains without any object on them. However the map design changes with the images, and always accompanies the scene you're rappresenting.
If I had given you less than a five here, I would have said that GoOlympus story is not intresting! I'm joking obviously, I put you a five because of the reasons I wrote in the Creativity section, and because I think the grammar is correct, as if as I'm not English so I can't really judge on this point.
Great "Birthday Party" cine GoOsiris! I hope you'll make some other scenarios/cinematics, as for me you are really clever ;).