hi.
I wanted to point out your military buildings weren't making units to fight half the time and you made calavery instead of ulfarsks and throwing axemen aginst poseidan.
and your reasouce gathering should be dwarves and gathers on every resource (mainly gathers on wood) and try to not lose military units and heal them with gp or mu's. and you need towers to protect your foward base. but other than that you did fine.