Playability: 2
I hate to say it, but all this is is a random map thats not random. There are no triggers, no instructions, NOTHING. its not all that well populated and suited for play in the first place, either. A suggestion: Know what kind of map your making.
Balance: 3
The balance wasn't focused on, that was obvious, but there were no gaping holes that i could see. Both players started out pretty much the same. The reason this isn't much higher is because it was not paid attention to.
Creativity: 4
Aside from the horrible map design flaws (in next section), the decent parts of the map were very well made, at least for a starter. The water looked pretty good, the forests weren't blocks, and there were... a few... animals. Its not really all that creative but you did show a good effort on those parts.
Map Design: 1
Theres nothing for it - Horrible. I was thinking it was rather good until i saw the GRUESOME things you did in the middle of the map. There are blocks that just shoot out of the ground, with random pyramids on them, and random items like a staircase are scattered around. It looks more like a developers playground than a map.
Story/Instructions: 1
There was nothing at all, not a story, not instructions, not even a description!
Additional Comments:
Good effort, but the stuff you did in the middle of the map was nothing less than horrendous. Your other landscapes, like water and the forest near the town centers was a lot better than people usually do. But those things sticking up out of the ground! *cringe*